I will Protect my Comrades

i think overall you got it really really good. but you could do better. first off i really... no loved the way you got senbonzakura. especially at the top of the page. it looks amazing <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="262" title="Thumbs Up"/> it looks like it is actually moving. now the second thing i want to say is the outline of the body was amazing!<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> also the facial features are almost perfect!<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="262" title="Thumbs Up"/> but one thing i saw which was a bit screwed up in the face was his mouth. I think u made the outline a bit too fat. but the eyes are epic! which is not an easy thing to draw. ummm shadows you could give a bit more detail to the cloak and add some more shadows for skin. and also for the skin you could have done some gradiation(i dont know how to spell it) also the neck is a bit broad...
NOW FOR THE GOOD NEWS!
EPIC!!! SENBONZAKURA shading is EPIC!
like the hair and facial features alot.

KEEP UP THE GOOD... I MEAN EPIC WORK THIS IS A JOB WELL DONE <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/e/e…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="375" title=" (Eek)"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="262" title="Thumbs Up"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="45" height="20" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="484" title="High-five!"/>